Editing Champion Question #3
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What Stimulus/Response “rule” does this example break? (Apologies to Dan Brown for changing some lines of his The Da Vinci Code).
Robert Langdon awoke slowly.
A telephone was ringing in the darkness-a tinny, unfamiliar ring. He fumbled for the bedside lamp and turned it on. Squinting at his surroundings he saw a plush Renaissance bedroom with Louis XVI furniture, hand-frescoed walls, and a colossal mahogany four-poster bed.
Where the hell am I?
Suddenly, the fog lifted.
The jacquard bathrobe hanging on his bedpost bore the monogram: HOTEL RITZ PARIS.Correct
Yes, the Stimulus for the fog lifting should occur BEFORE the Response.Incorrect
The problem is that the Stimulus for the fog lifting does not occur BEFORE the Response. A Stimulus should occur before it is Responded to.